I am taking a break from blogging until after the holidays. I will return on 1/7/13 with more How Author Write segments on Mondays and other things on Thursdays.
Here's wishing you and your a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Monday, December 17, 2012
Monday, December 10, 2012
How Authors Write- Elle Druskin
Today, I welcome fellow MuseItUp author Elle Druskin, Romance and Mystery author, to share her writing process with us.
What
do you write?
This
is a deceptively simple question with a complicated answer. I’m not
sure the genre label is important. The one rule that cannot be broken
in any writing is Write a Good Story. When I wrote my first book
which was written for the sole purpose of trying to figure out how to
write a book, I had no idea what I had written. It wasn’t going to
be seen by anyone so it didn’t matter which genre it might turn out
to be. At least, that’s what I thought. You can imagine my
surprise when To Catch A Cop was published and nominated as Best
Romantic Comedy of 2010 by The Romance Reviews.
I thought it was a romance. As it turned out, it was reviewed
as romance and mystery. I never saw the mystery; I knew it was there,
but weak, in my opinion. What did I know? Did it matter? I don’t
think so. Readers can figure out the genre and some books are cross
genre. A great story is a great story and the genre label will take
care of itself as long as it’s a great story. That being said, I’ve
mostly written romance and mystery. Currently, I’m focusing on The
Liberty Heights series. That could legitimately be labelled romance,
small town romance, romantic comedy and probably some other genres. I
have a great time writing the series and fortunately, my editors are
just as devoted to Liberty Heights and all the wacky things that seem
to happen in the town. I was pretty tickled when a reader wrote to me
after reading Animal Crackers (Book 1 in the series) asking for
driving directions to Liberty Heights. What a disappointment for her
that the town isn’t real, it only exists in my head but I know
exactly how it looks, what the people look like, sound like and just
about everything else so it’s real to me.
Do
you use 1st person, 3rd person, multiple POVs?
I have used all of
the above. My first book was first person. I thought that would be
easier for me to control and not run the risk of “head-hopping.”
During the re-write, I added a third person point of view but the
bulk of the book was told from first person. Reviewers commented
that it worked well,
that switching point of view did not detract in any way.
How
do you get started with a book- is it an idea, a character, vary
from story to story?
I think I probably start with the germ of an idea. I don’t
necessarily write sequentially but in bits and pieces that
eventually are pulled together to create a coherent story. These
scenes point out places where linking scenes might be needed to
craft an overall book that hangs together. For the Liberty Heights
series, I use secondary characters that may appear in previous
books, but then I decide to bring them front and center and give
them their own story. I use the characters who were primary in
earlier books as secondary. I kind of like that because it allows
all the characters to keep developing and for me as the writer, and
for the readers, to learn more about them. They surprise me lots of
times and I write the series!
Do
you draft quickly?
As I said, I don’t write in sequence. I might have some ideas for
scenes and as I am writing them, others start taking shape. I
usually know what ending I am writing towards but not necessarily
everything that might happen along the way. It just unfolds scene by
scene. Whether or not this happens quickly or takes a fair amount of
time doesn’t matter, as long as it ultimately results in a book
that fits the series, adheres to the tone (Liberty Heights is more
than a little bit quirky ) and still has fresh elements.
Do
you do research before your first draft or during?
That depends on the type of book. I might need to do some research
but it can also be done during the writing, or blanks can be left
where I mark places that I have to revisit once I am satisfied with
the scene development. As far as research goes, there is no
substitute for quality literature. Surfing online is not research,
sorry, but it isn’t. It might be a good starting point but not the
end point. Research should mean reading quality literature that is
most often found at a college library, consulting archives, or
occasionally, spending time with a professional to gain insight into
that profession. In terms of research, I think I’m a bit
advantaged. For my doctoral work, I conducted archival research and
oral history interviews so I’ve had a pretty good grounding in
research methodology. That doesn’t mean you need a PhD to research
material for a novel but it does mean a writer should be able to
differentiate between a reputable source and let’s say a less than
reliable source of information. It’s surprising how many people
cannot differentiate.
Do
you outline?
No.
It doesn’t work for me. It’s fine for other writers who adhere
strictly to the outline but I’ve found even when I tried, the final
product was so different to the outline that there was no point in it
for me. Every writer is different with a different voice, style and
technique. If outlines work for you, that’s great. They just don’t
work for me.
Do you work with CP's or Beta's? How soon into your draft do you let
them see your work?
I use Beta
readers. They don’t see a draft until I feel it is as good as it
gets. Liberty Heights is particularly special and one of my beta
readers said she laughed so hard reading Animal Crackers that she wet
her pants, so we now have the “wet your pants rule.” If you don’t
laugh that hard at least once, the book is not good enough. My beta
readers know what to look for, believable characters, balance of
narrative and dialogue, realistic dialogue, a well paced story that
has twists and engaging characters. Happily, they’re as addicted to
Liberty Heights as I am and continually ask me to write a new story
and even make suggestions who they would like to see featured. They
don’t always get what they want, but they’re always happy to read
another story. There are 2 books published in the series, Animal
Crackers and The Life of the Party. Book 3, Hanky Panky, will be out
in December 2012. The beta readers have read Books 4 and 5, and
happily, loved them both. Book 4 has been submitted so now it’s a
case of Wait and See if accepted.
What books/websites have you found most helpful to helping you write
your best?
One
of the cardinal rules of writing is to be a good reader. It’s a
fatal mistake to stop reading because one is so caught up in writing.
Reading is a pleasure, first and foremost. In terms of writing,
reading teaches vocabulary, how to create tension, page turners,
character development, and many other elements of the craft. I read
anything and everything and generally, I read about 4 books a week.
That includes fiction and non-fiction. The bottom line is reading is
an investment in the craft of writing.
What do you know now that you wish you knew when you started
writing?
Plenty! I think I’ve learned a considerable amount in terms of
balance in character point of view and how much information to
reveal. One of my earlier flaws was giving away too much, too soon.
It’s a mistake a lot of writers tend to make early in their writing
career. Hold it back, let it unfold slowly and use that to twist the
tension line.
What do you have out now, or coming out? Any upcoming events? A
website we can find you and your books at? An author photo? A
booktrailer? Anything else you want to share?
Here’s a brief synopsis of The Liberty Heights Series books.
Animal
Crackers: You’re fired. Karma really slammed Manhattan workaholic
Hayley Weaver. Out of work, out of money and out of luck. In
desperation, she grabs the first job offered, house-sitting a movie
star’s home. How tough could it be? Water the plants, take in the
mail. Oops! Nobody told Hayley the house is in New Jersey and loaded
with more critters than the Beverly Hillbillies. Local cutie and
veterinarian Jake Marx is dying to meet a woman he hasn’t known
since kindergarten. With Jake on animal phobic Hayley’s speed
dial, the whole town is in cohoots to give Jake and Hayley their
happily ever after.
Life
of the Party:
Cruise
director and party organizer extraordinaire Ellie Marx sweeps into
Liberty Heights organizing a party for any and every possible
occasion. Daddy baby showers, Not Quite Sweet Sixteens, beach parties
with no beach. No problem. Nothing stops Ellie who’s on a collision
course with foreign correspondent Zach Resnick. After ten years on
the road, Zach’s finally home in Liberty Heights seeking peace and
quiet to write a book. Cranky Zach doesn’t stand a chance with
Ellie around because she’s determined to turn him into The Life of
The Party.
Hanky-Panky:
Kaboom! A gas leak destroys Dana Fremder’s apartment and business
in Brooklyn. With nowhere to go, Dana runs straight to best friend
Hayley Marx in Liberty Heights where a gunman is running loose. Or so
Dana thinks. Voice over actor Hank Axelrod is loaded with sound
effects that pop, whine and screech, irritating Dana’s
overstretched nerves. Too bad for Hank and Dana, that Grandma
Baumgart’s joyride on a skateboard results in a concussion, and an
unshakeable conviction that grandson Hank and Dana are married.
Nobody wants to upset Grandma. What can Hank and Dana do?
It’s
Grandma as matchmaker along with Algernon the Meerkat. More romance,
fun and mayhem in Liberty Heights.
You
can find my books in lots of places.
My
website and blog which includes interviews, my world wide beach blog,
travel tips, excerpts from books, trailers and downloadable bookmarks
can be found at:
I’m
frequently spotted at Books and Writers Community. It’s a great
hangout for writers and readers. You’ll find some very famous names
engaging in all sorts of discussions there:
I’m
also on Facebook and Twitter:
Sunday, December 2, 2012
Today, I am thrilled to be a part of Aubrie Dionne's Colonization Blog Tour. So, without further ado, please welcome Lieutenant Crophaven.
Finding a new home has never been so
dangerous.
Please visit her website: http://www.authoraubrie.com
Hello, Lieutenant Crophaven, it’s
nice to have you here today!
Thank you. I have a lot of business
to accomplish with the ship reaching its destination. So if you’ll
keep this short…
Of course. We wouldn’t want to keep
the most important lieutenant from doing his job! Just a few quick
questions. Now: what are you looking forward to on Paradise 21?
It’s not really what I’m looking
forward to, it’s about keeping control and preventing any sort of
widespread panic when we get there. I want the colonization efforts
to run smoothly, and for everyone to keep their cool despite the
stressful situation of acclamation. That’s my job.
And it’s an important job! Let’s
continue: what do you think of this new generation of colonists
preparing for the tests?
A lot of them just plain aren’t
ready. I’ve seen some of the pretests, and the results are less
than desirable. There’s only a few that stand out in my opinion:
Nova Williams, for instance has been working her butt off. She’s
the daughter of two janitors on the ship, so I think she’s got a
little chip on her shoulder so to speak. But that’s okay, whatever
fuels a person to achieve their best. Sirius Smith is also another
hopeful. He’s doing great at aerodynamics and navigation and would
make a fantastic aviator. I’ll be interested to see where they end
up.
What do you think of the pairing system
on the ship?
It’s logical, efficient, and
prevents a lot of drama. I like it. End of story.
What’s your favorite thing to do on
the ship?
Prepare. I’m constantly evaluating
our resources and planning ahead for the future. The most important
thing is the survival of this colony. Since we lost contact with the
rest of the fleet, this ship could be humanity’s last hope. I’m
not going to let it fail.
Anything else you’d like to share
with us today?
The latest results from the scout
droids are in, and I need to get back to my work. You’ll have to
read further on the subject in Colonization: Paradise Reclaimed.
“Forbidden love on a paradise
planet that’s anything but paradise...Dionne’s Colonization will
keep you guessing.” – Cherie Reich, author of Defying Gravity
Andromeda has spent all seventeen years
of her life aboard a deep space transport vessel destined for a
paradise planet. Her safe cocoon is about to break open as Paradise
21 looms only one month away, and she must take the aptitude tests to
determine her role on the new world and her computer assigned lifemate. As a
great-granddaughter of the Commander of the ship, she wants to live
up to her family name. But, her forbidden love for her childhood
friend, Sirius, distracts her and she fails the tests. The results
place her in a menial role in the new colony and pair her with
Corvus, “the oaf”.
But when Andromeda steps foot on
Paradise 21, her predestined future is the least of her worries.
Alien ghosts from a failed colonization warn her of a deadly threat
to her colony. And when Sirius's ship crashes on the far ridge in an
attempt to investigate, she journeys to rescue him with Corvus.
Andromeda now must convince the
authorities of the imminent danger to protect her new home. What she
didn't expect was a battle of her own feelings for Sirius and Corvus.
Can she save the colony and discover
her true love?
Aubrie Dionne writes science fiction
fantasy with romantic
elements. Her writings have appeared in
Mindflights, Niteblade, Silver Blade,
Emerald Tales, Hazard Cat, Moon
Drenched Fables, A Fly in Amber, and Aurora
Wolf. Her books are published by
Inkspell Publishing, Entangled Publishing,
Lyrical Press, and Gypsy Shadow
Publishing. She’s also a professional flutist in
New England.
Please visit her website: http://www.authoraubrie.com
Blog:
httphttp://authoraubrie.blogspot.com
Twitter: @authoraubrie
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Thursday, November 29, 2012
Updates and Upcoming
Can you believe that November is almost over? Where has the year gone?
This year I didn't sign up for NaNo. I was was super busy and forgot about it, then when November came, I didn't think I'd have the time to devote to it.
While working on a new idea for a girl highwayman story, my characters hijacked the story and told me it would be a paranormal romance (in modern time), in first person (I usually write in 3rd) and from one POV (I usually have at least 2). Well, my characters must have known what they were talking about, because in two weeks I had around 35,000 words. And I had edited them some. One day, I wrote a chapter, and then the next day I removed the entire thing and re-wrote it, as the first idea didn't work the way I wanted it to.
I was plugging right along, then I hit a wall. My characters had led me to this place where I needed to figure out what/who was my "big bad". So, I read. And read some more. And I started watching a series on Netflix. All the while, I was letting my subconscious work out the story problems. And slowly, the answer came to me. Now, I know what my big bad is, and where I need to go, and I am hoping my characters (and muse) keep throwing the words I need out to me.
Did you NaNo? If so, how'd it go?
Upcoming:
Tomorrow is the release day for Michelle Pickett's Concilium: The Deaprture
Sunday I am hosting Aubrie Dionne here.
This year I didn't sign up for NaNo. I was was super busy and forgot about it, then when November came, I didn't think I'd have the time to devote to it.
While working on a new idea for a girl highwayman story, my characters hijacked the story and told me it would be a paranormal romance (in modern time), in first person (I usually write in 3rd) and from one POV (I usually have at least 2). Well, my characters must have known what they were talking about, because in two weeks I had around 35,000 words. And I had edited them some. One day, I wrote a chapter, and then the next day I removed the entire thing and re-wrote it, as the first idea didn't work the way I wanted it to.
I was plugging right along, then I hit a wall. My characters had led me to this place where I needed to figure out what/who was my "big bad". So, I read. And read some more. And I started watching a series on Netflix. All the while, I was letting my subconscious work out the story problems. And slowly, the answer came to me. Now, I know what my big bad is, and where I need to go, and I am hoping my characters (and muse) keep throwing the words I need out to me.
Did you NaNo? If so, how'd it go?
Upcoming:
Tomorrow is the release day for Michelle Pickett's Concilium: The Deaprture
Sunday I am hosting Aubrie Dionne here.
Thursday, November 22, 2012
Happy Thanksgiving, and a Winner!
I have so many things to be thankful for. A loving family, great friends, incredible support from the writing community, and good health, just to name a few.
Today, I hope that you and yours enjoy good times with family and friends, creating new things to be thankful for next year.
Happy Thanksgiving to you all!
And congratulations to Elizabeth, winner of Lorrie's book, WILD BLACKBERRIES.
Today, I hope that you and yours enjoy good times with family and friends, creating new things to be thankful for next year.
Happy Thanksgiving to you all!
And congratulations to Elizabeth, winner of Lorrie's book, WILD BLACKBERRIES.
Monday, November 19, 2012
How Authors Write- Katie Carroll
Today I welcome fellow MuseItUp author Katie Carroll. As I read through her answers, I found that Katie and I have more in common than just our fantasy stories and Muse.
What
do you write?
I
write YA, MG, and picture books in everything from fantasy to
contemporary.
Do
you use 1st person, 3rd person, multiple POVs?
I’ve
worked in both 1st
person and 3rd
person. I do have one story with multiple 1st
person POV characters. It really depends on what the story calls for.
How
do you get started with a book- is it an idea, a character, vary from
story to story?
I
usually start with an idea. It could start from a dream, a scene in
nature, a “what if” question, really anywhere. Usually the idea
is associated with a character. Although, it requires more of a
concerted effort on my part to flesh out a character versus
developing an idea.
Do
you draft quickly? Or are you more detailed in your draft?
I
am a painfully slow drafter and am constantly working on ways to be
quicker with drafts. I tend to work out in my head most of the major
plot points of a story before I even begin writing. It took me a
couple of years to draft my first novel and slightly less time for
the second novel I wrote.
Do
you do research before your first draft, during?
I
might do a little research before I begin drafting, but a good amount
of research is done while I draft. I often end up doing some research
while revising as well.
Do
you outline? How?
I
don’t outline, except in my head. As I've become more familiar
with my own writing style, I've realized I am a very plot driven
writer. Outlining really isn't necessary for me to keep track of my
plot; it’s all there in my head. I do, however, create what I like
to call a “mess” for each story. The mess can be all types of
things: marked up books I've used in research, scribbles in my
notebooks about characters and plots, sketches of physical spaces in
my WIP. I usually have a whole folder on my computer devoted to the
mess as well, which can have anything from articles from the Internet
to a calendar of events in the story.[The outlining in the head and notes everywhere is so me!
Do
you name everything up front when you are drafting or do you leave
comments for yourself to go back and fill in later so you don't lose
the flow of what you are working on?
I
tend to draft straight through without leaving out too much. Lately,
though, I've been trying to push through drafts quicker, so I've
been allowing myself to leave holes to come back and fill in later.
Do
you work with CP's or Beta's? How soon into your draft do you let
them see your work?
I
have both beta readers and a critique group I work with. I like to
give my beta readers chapters as I finish them. I use my beta readers
more for cheerleading than for critique. My beta readers are there to
keep me motivated by saying, “Where’s the rest of that book? I've
been dying to see how it ends.” I like to have a full draft done
before I engage my critique partners because I find too much feedback
too early in the drafting stage is too debilitating for my drafting
process.
What
books/websites have you found most helpful to helping you write your
best?
Okay,
confession time: I don’t really like books or websites about
writing. I think they help lots of writers be better writers, but I
just don’t personally get a lot out of them. I find going to
conferences helpful in many ways. They keep me inspired and eager to
write. There’s also something about seeing and hearing a writer in
person talking about their process that resonates with me much more
than reading about a writer’s process. For a supportive kidlit writing community, I've found author Verla Kay's discussion boards to be priceless.
What
do you know now that you wish you knew when you started writing.
That
every published author has his/her own path to publication and no one
writer’s path is better than another’s. I think it’s important
to cheer on fellow writers, but it’s equally as important not to
compare your own journey with theirs. [What a GREAT point!]
What
do you have out now, or coming out? Any upcoming events? A website we
can find you and your books at? An author photo? A booktrailer?
Anything else you want to share?
My
YA fantasy Elixir Bound is currently available through
MuseItUp
Publishing
and on Amazon. [I love this cover!]
Katora Kase is next in line to take over as guardian to a secret and powerful healing Elixir. Now she must journey into the wilds of Faway Forest to find the ingredient that gives the Elixir its potency. Even though she has her sister and brother, an old family friend, and the handsome son of a mapmaker as companions, she feels alone.
For it is her decision alone whether or not to bind herself to the Elixir to serve and protect it until it chooses a new guardian. The forest hosts many dangers, including wicked beings who will stop at nothing to gain power, but the biggest danger Katora may face is whether or not to open up her heart to love.
Buy Elixir Bound for your Kindle, Nook, PC, and other devices from MuseItUp Publishing. Elixir Bound is also available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Smashwords, and other ebook retailers.
I also have a picture book called The Bedtime Knight coming out in
November through the picture book app company MeeGenius!
and illustrated by Erika
Baird. [This looks absolutely adorable!]
With a little help from Daddy Knight, a young child learns how to turn the scary shadows of the night into fun imaginings. Read it yourself or have it read to you with the MeeGenius! picture book app.
Thanks for sharing your process with us, Katie!
Thursday, November 15, 2012
Gypsy Blood by Lorrie Unites-Struiff
Today, I welcome back fellow Muse author Lorrie Unites-Struiff. She's here to tell us about her Paranormal Romance, GYPSY BLOOD and a special giveaway she's running.
Hello again, everyone. Mary, Thank you so much for inviting me back
to your blog. This is such a fun place.
Aw, thanks, Lorrie. I'm happy to have you here again.
Today, I want to tell readers about my
novella, GYPSY BLOOD.
Oh, what a treat. I really enjoyed this novel. It's full of mystery, romance, and I loved the Romany plot line so much! You must have learned a lot of interesting things researching that.
When I researched the Roma
culture, I was very surprised to find such a rich heritage and learn
about these beautiful people. Their lore is one of the most
fascinating I’ve ever read. Many live among us today in the U.S.,
Canada and abroad. They number in the millions.
Did you know Yul Brynner was Roma? Sir
Charles Chaplin? Bob Hoskins, who spent his youth working in a circus
and then became an actor? The TV program, Criminal Minds, had a story
on last year about a gypsy family and a tradition. LOL. Of course,
for that program, it was on the darker side.
There are British actors who have a
Romany ancestry—though dating back to some generations ago. Sir
Sean Connery and Sir Roger Moore.
Never the less, I’ve read about their
customs, their beliefs, and have included many in my novella.
Come and meet Rita Muldova of pure Roma
blood, and a detective for the Keyport Police Department. Meet her
family: her mother, Anna, a great seer, and Uncle Dragus who plays
the sweetest melodies on his violin.
Instead of going on and on, let me show
you the cover, and you can read blurb and excerpt.
Everyone has
secrets.
Homicide Detective
Rita Moldova has a secret, a crystal amulet from her Roma bloodline
that shows her the last image a victim had seen before they died.
Now, a ritual killer is terrorizing her town and the crystal’s
magic has suddenly stopped.
FBI agent, Matt
Boulet, is sent to lead the task force and gives the group strange
orders. Worse, Rita senses he is holding back a deep dark secret
about the killer.
When she confronts
her seer mother’s advice, she learns another secret about their
clan that she finds impossible to swallow.
Rita swims through
a whirlpool of confusion as the investigation continues. Can Rita
deny the lore of the ancients? Can she deny her growing feelings for
Matt Boulet?
Excerpt:
The
units arrived and sealed the crime scene.
Matt
walked to her. “It’s a wash for tonight, let’s call in our
troops. All the uniforms on the scene will keep our man away.” He
took her hand. “Damn, your fingers are like ice.” He grabbed both
her hands and rubbed them between his, the friction warming more than
her fingers. “It’s late. Let me take you back to your car at the
station. You look wiped.”
She
let her shoulders slump. “Yeah, it’s been a long day.”
The
SUV’s seat cushioned her sore muscles. Rita let her head fall back
on the warm headrest with a deep sense of relief and closed her eyes.
Matt turned up the heat, and delicious warmth flowed over her legs. A
whisper of breath brushed her cheek, a hand slid over her waist. Her
eyes flew open.
He
laughed. “I’m just putting your seatbelt on. Don’t panic.”
Rita
inhaled deeply and caught the faint scent of spice, pine, and man.
His nearness tempted her to lay her head on his broad shoulder,
cuddle, and sleep.
The
grin he flashed…well, for a moment she could have sworn he had read
her thoughts. She sighed with frustration.
They
pulled up to the station and he walked her to the Rover. “Lock your
car doors. You’re still dressed like you’re ready for action.”
The
chilly car seat sent gooseflesh up the back of her thighs. With the
door open, she quickly turned the key and hit the heater. When she
glanced back up at him, she found his eyes devouring her from the top
of her blonde wig, down her legs, then back to rest where the hem of
her skirt barely covered her bikini panties.
She cocked her head.
“What?”
Matt
shook his head, took a deep breath, and groaned.
Her
gaze strayed to the noticeable bulge in his jeans. She lifted her
eyes to meet his. That sinful smile surfaced on his lips again.
“Watch
your legs.” He shut the Rover’s door and walked back to his SUV.
*****
For
your reading pleasure this
paranormal/romance/thriller-chiller/action/mystery is Available on Amazon at http://www.amazon.com/Gypsy-Blood-Born-Romany-ebook/dp/B008190LLK/ref=sr_1_12?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1336600438&sr=1-12
Thank you for reading. Please leave a
comment and to one commenter, I will put names in a hat and send you
a PDF copy of my popular paranormal short story, Wild Blackberries.
Read more about my published works at,
My blog
Facebook
Hope to see you there.
Thanks, Lorrie!
Monday, November 12, 2012
How Authors Write- Michelle Pickett
Today, I welcome fellow MuseItUp author and friend,
Michelle Pickett, to share her writing process with us.
What do you write?
I write both
adult and young adult urban fantasy, sci/fi and paranormal romances.
Do you use
1st person, 3rd person, multiple POVs?
So far I've only
written in the first person POV, but I'm drafting a book that will be
in the third person. I'm finding it a lot harder than I thought it
would be.
How do you
get started with a book- is it an idea, a character, vary from story
to story?
It is usually
the story that comes first for me. Although, sometimes the story and
the main character show up simultaneously.
Do you
draft quickly or are you more detailed in
your draft?
I'm not a fast
drafter. It usually takes me about six weeks to draft my first draft
and another six to do revisions and rewrites. [Wow! That seems fast to me, but my drafts are all over the place!]
Do you do
research before your first draft, during?
I don't usually
have a lot of research that needs to be done, but if I do I tend to
do it while I'm writing rather than before.
Do you
outline? How?
I don't, is the
short answer. I have a general idea and just go with that. However,
I'm starting to see the benefits of having at least a loose outline
to follow. I haven't found the method that works best for me yet, so
I'm trying different formats. I've been reading some craft books on
outlining. So far I've just been jotting down notes and keeping them
in order in relation to the storyline.
Do you
name everything up front when you are drafting or do you leave
comments for yourself to go back and fill in later so you don't lose
the flow of what you are working on?
I generally name
everything up front, but that doesn't mean the name will stick. I've
been known to change names a few times before finding the one that I
"feel" fits.
Do you
work with CP's or Beta's? How soon into your draft do you let them
see your work?
Nope, I've never
worked with them. When I started writing Concilium I didn't know they
existed. Afterward, when I learned of them, I was never really sure
how to go about finding one to work with. I have some family members
and friends that read my work that I call my "Betas and CPs"
but they really aren't.
What
books/websites have you found most helpful to helping you write your
best?
Hooked, by Les
Edgerton.
Sin and Syntax:
How to Craft Wickedly Effective Prose by Constance Hale.
Self-Editing for
Fiction Writers, How to Edit Yourself into Print by Renni Browne,
Dave King.
The Emotion
Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Expression by Angela
Ackerman, Becca Puglisi
What do
you know now that you wish you knew when you started writing.
I wish I knew
about Beta readers and Critique partners and how important they are.
I think Concilium would have been a much stronger book if I'd had
some additional input from outside sources. It's hard to be objective
when it's your "baby."
What do
you have out now, or coming out? Any upcoming events? A website we
can find you and your books at? An author photo? A booktrailer?
Anything else you want to share?
Concilium was
released in July.
The sequel,
Concilium: The Departure, is scheduled for release in November. Both
are published through MuseItUp Publishing.
PODs, my debut
young adult novel, will release in paperback through Spencer Hill
Press June 4, 2013 (my son's 12th
birthday!) [I think that is so awesome!]
I just signed a
second contract with Spencer Hill Press for a young adult paranormal
romance, titled Milayna, that will release in paperback in March of
2014.
Upcoming
Events:
I'll be at the 2013 Book Expo America in at the Javits Center in NYC
signing copies of PODs.
Places you can
find me on the web:
Website: www.Michelle-Pickett.com
Facebook:
www.Facebook.com/michellepickettauthor
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/michelle_kp
Goodreads: http://goodreads.com/michelle-pickett
Book Buy Links:
Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your process, Michelle!
Thursday, November 8, 2012
A Letter from MuseItUp Publisher Lea Schizas
MuseItUp Publishing may be a Canadian house but our authors come from all over the world, especially the United States where Sandy has caused horrific damage to our neighbours.
For the entire month of November, with any purchase made from our MuseItUp Bookstore, we will donate 10% of the purchase price to the Red Cross toward the devastation caused by Sandy. On behalf of all of us at MuseItUp Publishing we'd like to thank you for your support.
Monday, November 5, 2012
How Authors Write- Margaret Fieland
I hope you all had a great week last week, and that you were all safe during the Hurricane.
Today, I am returning to my series on How Author's Write. You can find my first post, with Dianne Salerni here. This week, I welcome fellow MuseItUp author, Margaret Fieland who shares her writing process with us.
What
do you write?
I write
poetry and fiction. I have a tween/YA sci fi published, and a chapter
book accepted for publication, due out next year. I'm working
on two more: another tween/YA sci fi, and an adult sci fi.
Do
you use 1st person, 3rd person, multiple POVs?
"Relocated,"
my published novel, is first person. The other, "The Angry
Little Boy," is third person limited -- one POV. Of the
two I'm working on editing. the tween/ya is first person. The
adult sci fi is my first multi-person POV novel. It's got five points
of view: the four characters involved in the main plot relationship,
and the antagonist, the bad guy in a political plot thing.
How
do you get started with a book- is it an idea, a character, vary from
story to story?
It varies,
but generally with a character and a situation, a setting, the start
and the finish. The details in the middle tend to be murky. For
"Relocated," I did plan -- but most of my planning was
devoted to world-bullding. I had about a page of notes on the plot,
most of which make me cringe when I read them over now, and most of
which went out the window once I started to write.
Do
you draft quickly? Or are you more detailed in your draft?
I
generally draft quickly. Then I have to go back and edit. For the
multi-person novel I'm editing now, for example, I wanted to weave
together two four-person relationships and an antagonist. I started
it out as a YA, first person, with the same main character as
"Relocated." I also drafted another version, multi-person,
sketchy, focusing on the story of the adult foursome. I got as far as
a beta reader for the first person YA version. She convinced me I was
telling the wrong story.
So I went back, reread both versions, and went back to the drawing board. This time I decided to focus on the four characters in the adult relationship, plus the antagonist, as POV characters. My first draft was a lot better, but I skimped on the secondary characters, and had to revise to bring them more forward. I'm pretty happy with the current version, and am down to what I really believe are final edits on it.
So I went back, reread both versions, and went back to the drawing board. This time I decided to focus on the four characters in the adult relationship, plus the antagonist, as POV characters. My first draft was a lot better, but I skimped on the secondary characters, and had to revise to bring them more forward. I'm pretty happy with the current version, and am down to what I really believe are final edits on it.
Do you do research before your first draft, during?
As
necessary. Since I don't do a lot of planning, there will most likely
be research needed as I go along. I do do some research beforehand --
for example, on desert ecologies before I started "Relocated."
I ended up having to research glass blowing and ceramics for the
novel later on. I researched the International Court, Native American
culture, and stringed instruments, among other things, for the
multi-person POV novel I'm working on now.
Do you outline? How?
I generally have the beginning, the ending, the major plot points, and
some notes about scenes.
For the 2011 Nano Novel, I had about two pages of notes, with notes on scenes. I followed them for more or less the first quarter of the novel and then it took off.
Mostly, though, I can't plan in too much detail, because my characters live and breathe for me as I write them. I don't know all of what's going to happen until I write it.
As to detailed scene planning. I often play a scene out in my head before I write it, and then I write it down. If it's the first draft, I'll make notes about the next couple of scenes as well.
Do you name everything up front when you are drafting or do you leave comments for yourself to go back and fill in later so you don't lose the flow of what you are working on?
I'm not
much for going back. If I really need something, I'll make a note in
the MS: ** FIXME ** :
Then when I need to, I can go back and search for FIXME.
Then when I need to, I can go back and search for FIXME.
Do you work with CP's or Beta's? How soon into your draft do you let them see your work?
Both.
I have a writing partner. We exchange a chapter a week. As to Beta
readers, when I reach the point where I feel it needs a whole
read-through and comments. How do I know that?
Good question {grin}.
Good question {grin}.
What do you know now that you wish you knew when you started writing?
{grin}
How to write fiction. I wrote the novel coming out next year in a
weekend, then I spent the next year and a half or two years learning
enough about fiction to make it into a publication-worthy novel.
But
I might not have been motivated to study all that if I hadn't needed
to get my novel right.
What do you have out now, or coming out? Any upcoming events? A website we can find you and your books at? A booktrailer? Anything else you want to share?
I can be found online in the following places:
Website and blog: http://www.margaretfieland.com/
The
Poetic Muselings website and blog: http://poetic-muselings.net/
Link
to "Relocated" on the publisher's
website: http://tinyurl.com/MuseRelocated
Link
to Sand in the Desert on Amazon: http://tinyurl.com/SandPoetry
It's also avail in print. Link to Lifelines Poetry Anthology: http://tinyurl.com/LifelinesPoetry
It's also avail in print. Link to Lifelines Poetry Anthology: http://tinyurl.com/LifelinesPoetry
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