And now to the good stuff! I'm pleased to be hosting fellow MuseItUp author, KF Breene as she talks about her writing process and shares a bit of her release, INTO THE DARKNESS. Welcome, K!
What do you write?
The newest release is paranormal
romance/urban fantasy. Before this I’ve published contemporary
romance. After this I will put out some fantasy. Next to write is
dystopian. I don’t like to stick to one genre; I get bored easily. [I totally understand this. I've been genre hopping lately, too!]
Do you use 1st person,
3rd person, multiple POVs?
I do all of the above. The first thing
I wrote was in first person, which is great if you want to leave the
motives of the other characters a mystery. I like third person best
because I can better visualize what I’m writing. The book coming
out now is both first and third person. Sasha, the heroine, is always
first person, and everyone else is third. Sounds like it wouldn’t
work, right? Trust me, it does ;) I’ve seen one other book that did
it, which is how I knew I could cross that boundary. I get the inner
workings of the heroine’s mind, but I get to work with more
characters, too.
Yeah, it does still wound weird—I
know. Give a read, see what you think.
[I'm beginning to think you're my writing twin. My FAERY series (first book releasing from BookFish Books this summer) does this same thing. The Faery Queen sections in Faery are 3rd person, and the rest of the book in the Human realm are 1st person. And yes, it does work!]
How do you get started with a
book—is it an idea, a character vary from story to story?
My books all kind of start the
same—with a daydream. I’ll be running, or driving, or showering,
or looking at a spreadsheet, and random things will flit through my
head. Sometimes I imagine myself somewhere else because I’m tired
of my location. Sometimes I imagine myself meeting someone new. With
Into the Darkness I wanted to live in a world with magic, and
I also wanted to come up with another way to explain the myth of
vampires in a modern day society. Those two desires then went back
into my daydreaming head, and the rough outline was born. [Nice. Love vampires!]
Do you draft quickly?
Draft? Um…well, if a fuzzy idea of an
alternate reality is a draft, then it depends on how bored I am with
life at the time. Like I said, I daydream. Sometimes I sit down to a
keyboard and just start typing, no direction in mind. With other
stories, I take months to think about the world I will create. I get
a rough idea of the characters’ personalities, of their society, of
their struggles, and hang around there for a while. I might even have
a starting and ending point. But for me, writing isn’t a passion.
It isn’t a calling. Film is. Writing, for me, is a way to create
movies without a film crew (my dream was to be a director—which I
am fulfilling with the written word instead of the camera). I sit
down, and go on a journey. Some might say I don’t outline a draft
at all. And that’s the fun of it.
Do you research before your first
draft? During?
I tend to write what I know. At least
in a basic sense. That could be from watching a whole lot of survival
shows and deciding I want to put a character into that situation. It
could be from pulling crazy experiences from my life and
incorporating them into the story. Everything I write has a kernel of
truth—I don’t know how to write things that don’t.
I mentioned I get bored easily, right?
Well, I also love to learn. Those two things combined means that in
my 34 years, I’ve covered a lot of ground, and I’ve studied a lot
of subjects. I have a lot of kernels to expand from.
For Into the Darkness, I used a
heavy dose of knowledge from one of my other passions—Anthropology.
I find the subject fascinating. A few things I had to go back and
look up, but mostly I pulled from the items that lodged in my head,
which were quite a few. After having a kid my memory went out the
window, but in my scholarly years, I retained quite a lot. It really
helped turn the vampire myth into something that could be explained
in a modern world (with a lot of artistic license, of course).
Do you outline?
Nope. Like I said, I might have a
starting point, or I might have an ending point, but not usually
both. I can’t express it any other way besides noting that I
daydream. I just put my head in a body in some other place, with
other people, and get to know my surroundings. I think about what the
people are doing, and why. Random scenes pop into my imagination, and
I take note of them. I analyze how those scenes might reverberate
through the story. I continue to develop my sense of this new world.
When I am bursting with ideas and a desire to live in this place, I
put my hands on a keyboard, and live it. [I do something similar, so I totally get this. I let the scene play out in my mind like a movie, and when it all clicks, then I write it out. Not every scene, but many are this way for me.]
Do you name everything up front when
you are drafting or do you leave comments for yourself to go back and
fill in later so you don't lose the flow of what you are working on?
I certainly do name everything—but
never with any thought. I kind of just throw things out there and see
how it goes. That sounds amateur probably, but what you have to
understand is I am extremely logical. Before my dream was film, I
wanted to be an accountant. I eventually majored in business.
I am an accountant with a strong
business sense. Math brain.
Some things that art people find
difficult, I do automatically. I name things, create reasons why they
exist, and make sure my B.S. meter doesn’t go off when I am working
with this new facet that probably just popped out of the scene. If it
sounds too weird, I’ll alter it so it (whatever it might be) fits
into the world I created.
Lately I’ve told a few people of
ideas or stories I have written, and they always go… Huh.
Even an agent, who is used to dealing
with writers, had that reaction. Meaning, “That sounds crazy, and
you must suck at writing.”
I don’t know about my ability to
write, but even the fantastical things I come up with will make sense
when I put them in the story. That’s because, if they don’t make
sense, I don’t keep them in. I can’t stand for things to be
totally out there. They don’t have to be real, but they do
have to jive with the elements around them. So yes, I name away. Then
create reasons why they are plausible. Then poke holes in those
reasons…and finally fill in the holes. If I don’t tie up all the
loose ends, my mind dwells on it. So yes, I name away, and then make
sure the new creation is water tight. Or, at least, jelly bean tight.
Do you work with CP's or Beta's? How
soon into your draft do you let them see your work?
If you’re a writer, you best be using
Beta’s! I self-published a story thinking it wasn’t all that
great (not even bothering to send it to a publisher) without editing
or using a beta reader. The reviews I got back nearly buckled me.
Readers liked the story, but the editing was terrible (my worst
fear), and there were a few issues that a beta could’ve smoothed
out.
I think I mentioned that I hate to
fail. Well, that was failing. Even though I sold a great many books,
I still viewed it as failing based off the amount of negative
reviews—why does one negative review wipe out four positive ones
and then ruin your day? I’ll never know, but there you have it.
Anyway, since then, my stuff goes
through two editors and as many betas as I can find. I actually pay
good beta readers now (they are on my “new book payroll”) because
they greatly improve the story. I don’t mind harsh critique on the
front end—I can fix that. Whatever staves off those angry hornets
at Amazon is good news!
How soon into the drafts? When I’m
completely done with the manuscript. When I can read it through, as a
reader (not a writer), and love it. If my mind wanders for any reason
while reading, or if I get bored reading at any time, I revise, and
put it back on the shelf for a future read-through.
I have six stories on the shelf right
now. Some are first drafts, some second, and the fantasy I mentioned
is getting ready for a fourth read through. I’m excited to read it
again—I really like it. Not because I wrote it—I don’t really
care about that. I’m excited to meet the characters again. To
re-live some funny moments. To feel their pain. To see them triumph.
That means it’s nearly ready for the first round of edits. Then the
beta readers. And then more editors. Finally, after all that, it’ll
be ready for public consumption.
Side note to clarify my method: Mary
and I are both with MuseItUp Publishing, which is about the best
publishing house I could’ve gotten with. But I’m a business
major, turned accountant, which is also excellent at computers. Oh
yeah, and now I write a thing or two. The only thing I really lack is
marketing. So I don’t use publishers, anymore. I foot the bill for
all of the above with the great vendors I’ve collected, and then I
prepare it for the bookstores, and then monitor the sales. I maintain
control, which is how I can put my story through an editor, then
send it to betas, and then more editing. That is not a normal
deal with a publishing house.
My betas are excellent and opinionated.
I’ll revise my book with each beta until the book goes through
edits, and then I’ll do a final revision with the editors comments
in mind. My stuff has seen a lot of eyes before it goes to shelves.
That is how extensive my fear of
failure is. [I really like this process. In addition to being at Muse, I'm also at BookFish Books, and I'm also self publishing a couple novella's this year. And they will see my CP's and an editor before they go out. You're right- that is so very important.]
What books/websites have you found
most helpful to helping you write your best?
None. To be my best, I read. A lot. And
then I write. And write. And keep writing. And then read some more. I
search for the best writers so I have a high bar to aspire to. To
hopefully help me grow. I ingest the story while noticing how the
writer told it. I think the way to be an excellent writer is to read
a lot, write often, and read/edit your work.
I did some beta work to “give back”
and was surprised when the writer said, “This is the third time I
revised it! Maybe I’ll get it right on the next story the first
time.”
Terrible way to view things. There was
only one chapter J.K. Rowling wrote, in the whole Harry Potter
series, that she didn’t go back and revise. Write the first draft
with your heart, revise with your head.
That said, the one thing I’ve learned
from a website was about showing versus telling. In my opinion, the
main reason Indy writers fail is because they don’t “show”
what’s happening. They don’t experience it, making it impossible
for the reader to experience it with them. That’s why I re-read my
story as a reader. I wait a while, for the details to wear away
(often writing something else), and when I come back, I expect to get
engrossed in the story. The boredom and shifty eyes means I’m
probably telling. Bad.
Revise. [More great advice! Letting the novel sit and then going back to it with fresh eyes let's you find things you missed the first time around. And I love how you mention the boredom and shifty eyes. Good things to watch out for when you're reading through. If you're bored with it, a reader will likely be, too.]
What do you know now that you wish
you knew when you started writing?
Needs:
1. Great, professional cover.
2. Catchy blurb.
3. Professional editors.
4. Beta readers.
You need a good cover like a four-way
stop needs stop signs. It is the thing that catches the eye, and
makes a reader look harder. Then, of course, they read your blurb.
That reels them in. You writing will hopefully keep them in, but
mistakes will buck them back out.
Whether you are self-publishing, or
going through a publisher, make sure the editing is spot on. Readers
notice. And they’ll write that in reviews. And your book will stop
selling.
Like I said, MuseItUp is great. They do
a thorough job with editing. They put out a good product—but not
all publishing houses were created equal. I’ve read a book put out
by a supposed publishing house with a great many inexcusable errors.
There was an obvious error in the second paragraph. You have to make
sure that editing is carried out or your sales will greatly suffer. [Indie-authors and small presses aren't alone in this. I've seen some bad editing out of some big houses, and while I love the author and they story, I did feel a little cheated on paying what I did for the book.]
Beta readers—note what I said above.
What do you have out now, or coming
out? Any upcoming events? A website we can find you and your books
at? An author photo? A booktrailer? Anything else you want to share?
Good god. *dodging questions*
Into the Darkness is coming out
now. It’s action and comedy and fun all wrapped up into a
paranormal ball, and then hurled at the reader.
I have a giveaway
going, and will have flash giveaways at the blog and website randomly
just to keep the ball bouncing.
You can find K here:
Website: kfbreene.com
Blog: kfbreene.org
Twitter: @kfbreene
Now, for an excerpt from Into the Darkness. Be sure to read all the way to the end for the giveaway!
I’d
always been different. I saw objects in the night where others saw
emptiness. Large, human shaped shadows, fierce yet beautiful, melting
into the darkness. I collected secrets like other women collected
bells; afraid to fully trust lest my oddities be exposed.
Until
I saw him. He’d been gliding down the street, unshakable confidence
in every step.
It wasn’t just that he was breathtakingly handsome
with perfect features. Something about him drew me. Sucked my focus
to him and then tugged at my body. As his eyes met mine, I was
entrapped.
No
one had noticed him. He’d been right there, just beyond the light,
but only I had perceived.
I
had to know if he was real. Or maybe I really was crazy. And even
when my secret box was blasted wide open, dangers hurled at me like
throwing knives, I couldn’t stop until I unraveled his true
identity.
I
just had to know.
As
I met his black eyes, his puzzled expression deepened. “You’re
human…”
“We
established that, yes. What I want to know is, if I am human, what
does that make you? And why do I notice you when others usually
don’t?”
His
head cocked to the side. His easy balance, his lethal edge; he was
like a blade resting on billowing silk. “Very few humans are able
to withstand our pheromones. Fewer still to break a Kolma
once it has been placed. You’ve not been trained, that’s obvious;
so how is this possible when you’re definitely human? Do you
possess the blood of another species?”
I
could barely think past the pounding ache of my body, begging to
touch him. I needed to get a grip! He was revealing some very
interesting factoids I needed to jot down in my mental notebook.
His
nostrils flared. “Charles was right; your arousal is a unique
scent. Like a spicy, warm drink on a mid-winter’s night. It rises
above other smells, entrancing the mind.”
“Umm,”
charged with questions, determination, anger, and demands, I thrust
forward, “Listen, what did you mean about withstanding
the…pher-thing? Or breaking the other thing? How can you trap
someone’s head with pleasure? Because I’m pretty sure—not
positive, but pretty sure—that Jared is straight. And also, I
really think we should circle back to what the hell you are, and why
nobody knows that you exist? Because this whole people scattering
thing is not normal, and I think an explanation is probably in
order.”
He
stepped closer, not hearing me, or not caring that I spoke. His eyes
looked at me like I was a life-sized riddle. They delved, searching.
He took another step, forcing me to retreat two steps to keep
distance between our bodies. Another step back had my back to the
wall.
A
small smile curved his lips. “I exude pleasure, you run. I exude
fear, you come calling. You want me, I can smell it. I can feel it,
almost like a palpable thing. Give in to it. Yield to me.”
Oh
God I wanted to. His body was mere inches from mine, his intense eyes
looking down into my soul from a face out of a Renaissance painting.
The power of him, the sheer strength, had strange, primal fantasies
running amok through my head. My core tingled, my chest surged, and
my nipples were so hard they could cut this stone wall.
Why
had I come here, again?
Oh! That sounds like a very, very good read!
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The shifty eyes line is such a good tip. Not one I've ever consciously hashed out, but the feeling has niggled my author conscience. Then again, it looks like you've got it all down to science, and its impressive you put all your talents to work in your writing.
ReplyDeleteHey Loren! Yes, the shifty eye thing niggles me every now and then too- I really need to pay more attention, both in my work and those I CP for- no good not letting people (yourself included) know when something just doesn't seem to work right!
DeleteThanks for stopping by!!
I definitely don't have everything figured out! I've merely narrowed down what seems to work for me, always trying to hone and refine. I don't like being bored, though, so if I find my attention wandering from something I wrote, or feel the need to skim, I defiintely take notice :)
DeleteDefinitely a good point to consider, though. If you, the author, are dreading reading it, then so will your reader :-)
DeleteThanks for having me today, Mary!!
ReplyDeleteYou're so very welcome, K!!!
DeleteI really enjoyed this interview. K, you shared so much good, solid advice. I think it's really interesting that you're putting your love of film into writing. One of my favorite authors is a very visual writer. I'll be interested to check out your writing style to see if it translates in that same way.
ReplyDeleteIt's been commented that my style is unique. I call it off-kilter. Sometimes this is a good thing, and sometimes I scare people away. You just never know. I'm bold, though- you've been warned - lol?
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Heather. I'm also anxious to check out K's writing. I know the snippet she shared here really whetted my appetite.
DeleteAs for visual writing-I try to picture my scenes as if I were watching a movie, especially when I'm doing description. I kind of think-hmm, what would the camera show? and then I describe what I see.
K- there's nothing wrong with bold!
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